Tuesday, September 26, 2006

one deep breath haiku: windows and doorways


squeaking hinges, creaking wood
smells of dust and mold
you go first...a push...no you

2 comments:

Tammy Brierly said...

I loved this because it made me smile and reminded me of Nancy Drew. LOL

susanlavonne said...

very clever! however, I shouldn't have opened this in a meeting because I was the only person who got a big smile...dead giveaway i wasn't on task!