Wednesday, October 25, 2006

one deep breath haiku prompt: mystery

dark blue place of space
tiny pinpoints bursting fire
moon lumbering by

3 comments:

Tammy Brierly said...

Lovely view in your haiku :)

Nancy Bea Miller said...

I really like the image of the moon "lumbering by"! Yes, exactly like that some nights.

rel said...

Megan,
I like your observation and how you've expressed it.
rel