Monday, February 05, 2007

one deep breath haiku: twilight


mother dusk tucks in the sun
turns the light down low
brings a night light, silver moon


7 comments:

Annie Jeffries said...

So incredibly beautiful. The colors are so soothing. I am rocked to sleep.

Becca said...

What fabulous, creative images...you know, when I was thinking about "twilight" I kept seeking the sun "going to bed" but somehow couldn't get the "write" words...you described exactly what I was thinking :)

Perfect!

Tiffany said...

I like the image of the sun being tucked in and the moon is my very favorite night light.

Kim said...

This is truly lovely, it has the feeling of a gentle lullaby. I really enjoyed this.

Tammy Brierly said...

Nature is very maternal and you wrote a wonderful haiku :)

Crafty Green Poet said...

lovely haiku and the photo is gorgeous.

angie said...

This is very sweet. The photo is beautiful, too.