Wednesday, May 02, 2007

one deep breath haiku: the sea

exultant sea song
congregation of bubbles
exploding with joy

3 comments:

susanlavonne said...

wonderful! made me explode with joy too :-)

Crafty Green Poet said...

very joyful dipiction of the sea!

Jone said...

What a joyful description. I could see those bubbles exploding.