Thursday, June 07, 2007

one deep breath haiku: architecture

in the cool dark nave
ancient shadows come to me
speaking through the stone

Architects design spaces. Contractors erect them. People breath life into them.

7 comments:

Tammy Brierly said...

Megan, I really liked "dark nave" it really set the tone.

spacedlaw said...

Haunting !
I really like it.
Nathalie

Gerald (Ackworth born) said...

very nice

Anonymous said...

Oh, I like this! And, understand it well.

get zapped said...

Powerful in so few words! Nice.

Cheryl Finley said...

Wow! I like... and it's the perfect narration to the shadow photo you just took!

P.S. I have a few haiku too! -- they're fun to create.

thanks for being such a wonderful muse...
Cheryl

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

I felt like I was there.