thoughts in migration
Cool linked poems! Amazing. Great work!
I love the sound of "straight up noontime sound" and also like the way they connect.
Love those, in particular "the thin ends of the day".
I love the link in these and the incredible imagery you created. I also love the passage of time that the sun and light journey through. Really, really beautiful.
I like the connection of the two; really like the image of sun flattening light like a pancake.
great linkage - I felt it!
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Cool linked poems! Amazing. Great work!
I love the sound of "straight up noontime sound" and also like the way they connect.
Love those, in particular "the thin ends of the day".
I love the link in these and the incredible imagery you created. I also love the passage of time that the sun and light journey through. Really, really beautiful.
I like the connection of the two; really like the image of sun flattening light like a pancake.
great linkage - I felt it!
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